August 9th, 2015, 2:29 pm

vol1_ch03_p97

time to withdraw and regroup

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August 9th, 2015, 2:33 pm

This got awkward fast... Only one more page before the end of the chapter :D

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August 9th, 2015, 9:35 pm

That blush was perfect.

August 10th, 2015, 12:46 am

"Oh s--t, she's really angry for legit reasons, what should I do thinkthinkthinkthinkthink Oh I know, PUPPY EYES. I'll also let that dress slip off my shoulder for a moment, since I feel very generous right now. And then finish her of with FLIRT."
Zenwu, master of distraction :D I could say, "nice save"...but did it really work? Only the future page will tell!

August 11th, 2015, 6:27 pm

@Captain Apricot
We're glad the blush is noticable and it's easy to figure out what happened. We were a little anxious that this page will not be clear.


@Fangirl
Zewnu is doing his best to salvage the situation and make a better impression. We'll see how sucessful he will be ;-)

August 13th, 2015, 3:00 am

If I may be a judge, I'd say it's a bit too soon to offer such thing XD Uene looks like she considerably calmed down, but I'm not so sure it will work XD

August 14th, 2015, 6:15 pm

@Fangirl

And out of curiosity, if I may ask, do you want him to succeed?

August 15th, 2015, 5:12 pm

I don't think I do. That would be too easy.
I mean, such proposition is just too light and too soon considering the gravity of the situation.

If I was Uene I'd definitely think he's taking it too lightly and/or tries to distract me.
If I'd felt sarcastic, I'd definitely snark him all over, especially when he was just given a horse -out- -of- -spite-, yet he's just like "let's go for a ride!!!" xD (this is just too comedic, the more I think about it lol. For a second I had this extremly out-of-character idea of Zenwu thinking "hmmm, I put him in danger, I get gifts! Let's see what I can get if I actually make him end up dead :D oh boy, I hope I'll get a castle. Then I'll invite her for a dinner party in it.")
But most propably I'd make it very clear that he needs to work really hard to regain my trust.

I mean, single "I'm sorry" and then "let's go for a ride"? That ain't enough to cut it. I'd say Uene was very generous with her "I'll try" response, and now he's just pushing it. Maybe because he seems more concerned about himself and how Uene feels about him right now, rather than the fact that he endangered someones life... and he selfishly tried to fix that now. That's how I see it.

But it's easy to have so strong opinions, and obviously I'm not Uene, so I'm just gonna wait and see what really happens :P

August 16th, 2015, 1:44 pm

Thank you for answering this honestly!

I totally get your point and I would probably react like that myself. On the other hand sarcasm is not really Uene's thing.
You really are setting a very low bar for Zenwu XD. He is almost gaining my sympathy ;-)

August 17th, 2015, 5:22 am

I'm shorry :T

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